Friday, 31 March 2017

A Piece Of Paradise


This is my Piece of Paradise google drawing. The story is about these two gods that have a fight about with one is the most important to the land people, once they both found out that they needed each other to keep the corp alive. 

Wednesday, 29 March 2017

The Prince of Popland

The Prince of Popland
Once upon a time there were two selfish boys. They lived in a place called Popland with was near New york. They both lived in a castle called Prince Palace, there names were Johnny and Jonah.


One day Johnny decided to run away because he didn't want to fight his brother Jonah to be the new king of Popland. As Johnny was  packing his bag to leave his father walked past and told him not to leave because he will beat Jonah and will also become the king but Johnny just walked past his dad and gave him a kiss and said “Forgive me” and left.


After a few year Jonah became the king the king. When Jonah father finished putting the crone on Jonah’s head he said “ As your king you must give me something and I’ll give you a place in my castle, and if not you will live in your smelling and trouble house you live in know” in a anger voice.


As Jonah’s father Named James walked into Jonah’s brother’s room he noticed that there were picture of animals and people running around having fun, he also noticed that they have names on the paper the first name was New Zealand, Africa, Malaysia, Japan, America and more. Well James was looking at all the pictures he decided to go and get his son.  

After packing all his clothes he waited for the morning to tell the people in the village That he is leaving. When it was morning the people come to the castle to hear the notice and the James said “ I’m leaving to go and find my son. I know he's out there and I’ll bring him back” everyone was happy but Jonah he was anger so he Said to the man who was going with his dad “ Make sure you kill him or your died instead” in a anger voice.

 The End 

Friday, 24 March 2017

People & Place Names


This is my People & Place Names, it is about A Serious Game. A Serious Game is a story about this man who had to perform a dance for the New born baby in the village of Motutapu. The man was offend to ride in one of the boats but then he ask to ride the whale that belonged to Tinirau so he let him take the whale, he also told Kae to get of the whale once he got to the shallow but he didn't do it he stayed on and the whale died. You can look at the google drawing about the People & Place Names. Hope you enjoy this drawing.

Wednesday, 22 March 2017

Editing

My Edited writing.

What’s your special place in this community?? Well my special place in my community is the Library near Te Oro in GI.


One reason why the Library is my special place is because in the Library it’s quiet and there’s free wi-fi. Also is my special place because there are a lot of books that I have never read before and that are new to me.  

Another reason why my special place in this is Library because they have computer that we can use to do our homework or other thing we use the intronet. Also inside the ladies behind the desk are nice to you when you walk into the Library.

The last reason why my special place is Library because when I read the books I get lost into my imagines and think I’m in the story or I think I’m sleeping. It also helps me get butter in my reading.

These are my reason why it my special place. What’s the reason you like your special place in your community???


Real writing.


What’s your special place in this community?? Well my special place in my community is the Library near Te Oro in GI.


One reason why the Library is my special place is because in the Library it’s quiet and there’s free wi-fi. Also is my special place because there are a lot of books that I have never read before and that are new to me.  

Another reason why my special place in this is Library because they have computer that we can use to do our homework or other thing we use the intronet. Also inside the ladies behind the desk are nice to you when you walk into the Library.

The last reason why my special place is Library because when I read the books I get lost into my imagines and think I’m in the story or I think I’m sleeping. It also helps me get butter in my reading.

These are my reason why it my special place. What’s the reason you like your special place in your community???



As you can see this is my writing test writing about my Special Place in the community. The first piece of writing is my edited writing which I have changed some of the words and moved them to different places in my writing. The other one is my real writing it's the one I write in my test. it had some things that I've changed like spelling and full stop. Hope you enjoy reading this piece of writing.



Language Features

This is my language features it is about the whale child. The whale child is a story about a child that fell out of a boat and got brought up by these whales that found her. In the left corner you will see that I have drawn a picture of waves that look like giant glass towers. 

Friday, 17 March 2017

!!The amazing world of Polyfest!!

!!The amazing world of Polyfest!!

Have you ever been to Polyfest?? Well on the 16 of march our block went to the opening of Polyfest. Polyfest mean’s Polynesian Festival for different culture’s like samoa, tonga and many more.

Our group went to AUT for our first activity. We learnt about different thing like this person made a app so the people in fiji, we also saw this video about matariki, it showed how the star were formed and it also showed there name.

Image result for polyfest diversity stageAfter all our activities my group went to the Diversity sage and watched different countries like tokelau,fijian,china and korea. Then we went to the moeri stage and saw people singing and dancing with poi’s.
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My favourite part of the day was when aysha bort some popcorn for herself but she shared it with all of us.

What I learnt from yesterday is that everyone is apart of something. After all that I’ve learnt different things when I was there, hope fully you go!!!