Editing

My Edited writing.

What’s your special place in this community?? Well my special place in my community is the Library near Te Oro in GI.

One reason why the Library is my special place is because in the Library it’s quiet and there’s free wi-fi. Also is my special place because there are a lot of books that I have never read before and that are new to me.  

Another reason why my special place in this is Library because they have computer that we can use to do our homework or other thing we use the intronet. Also inside the ladies behind the desk are nice to you when you walk into the Library.

The last reason why my special place is Library because when I read the books I get lost into my imagines and think I’m in the story or I think I’m sleeping. It also helps me get butter in my reading.

These are my reason why it my special place. What’s the reason you like your special place in your community???

Real writing.

What’s your special place in this community?? Well my special place in my community is the Library near Te Oro in GI.

One reason why the Library is my special place is because in the Library it’s quiet and there’s free wi-fi. Also is my special place because there are a lot of books that I have never read before and that are new to me.  

Another reason why my special place in this is Library because they have computer that we can use to do our homework or other thing we use the intronet. Also inside the ladies behind the desk are nice to you when you walk into the Library.

The last reason why my special place is Library because when I read the books I get lost into my imagines and think I’m in the story or I think I’m sleeping. It also helps me get butter in my reading.

These are my reason why it my special place. What’s the reason you like your special place in your community???

As you can see this is my writing test writing about my Special Place in the community. The first piece of writing is my edited writing which I have changed some of the words and moved them to different places in my writing. The other one is my real writing it's the one I write in my test. it had some things that I've changed like spelling and full stop. Hope you enjoy reading this piece of writing.